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Family Story:  Goal...to tell stories from a loved one (3 biographies /1 autobiography)

 

Story #1 (Biography) About my dad as a teenager.

 

 

Story # 2 (Biography) Vetnam war.

 

 

Story # 3 (Biography) mariges w/ my mom

 

 

Story # 4 (Autobiography)

 

 

 

Research: Goal is to research and present information that supports a thesis statement.

 

Thesis Statement:

 

 

Specific Research found:

 

 

Questions:

 

 

Problems:

 

 

 

 

 

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Assignment #11 http://www.imao.us/index.php/category/racism/

 

http://cityroom.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/02/18/chimp-stimulus-cartoon-raises-racism-concerns/?scp=1&sq=RACISM%20IN%20HUMOR&st=cse 

 

http://media.www.theorion.com/media/storage/paper889/news/2009/03/04/Opinion/Racism.Rampant.Cartoon.Offends-3657931.shtml

 

http://www.sfgate.com/cgi-bin/article.cgi?file=/chronicle/archive/2005/05/22/EDG5CCS6J71.DTL

 

http://nineisenough.wordpress.com/2008/03/31/thoughts-about-racist-humor-and-racism/ 

 

 

 

 

Assignment #10    

##the 2 sound hears are the difrent mood of the book the top is all hate full and shy and confused, the bottem is how thay are happy but in no control.

~ thires a </3 between obr and tite

~titans name has 2 " donkeys" on the side of it

~ obers hase the flower

~ flowers on the bed for Lysander and Helana

~ the cupit arrow at the top is pointing to the world "love"

~ One of the cupits has a link try to find it :D

Assignment #9  When love is lost. 

Assignment # 8: Essay

 

Essay     >>>>I think Shakespeare is saying about love and infatuation is that infatuation is like a love potion and until that potion or spell is removed only then can true love prevail.

         An example of this idea is Oberon wanted Puck to create a potion because Oberon felt Demetrius was in love with the wrong person.   Oberon told Puck to undo everything he had done with the potion.  Oberon and Puck were trying to turn infatuation into love.   

      Another example of infatuation versus love is,  Oberon gave the fairy queen the potion and so she would fall in love with Bottom.

This is not true love.  It is infatuation.  This happened because Puck  put some “milk” from a flower in fairy queen’s eyes.   If Puck would have left the fairy queen alone, she would not have fallen in love with Bottom.  I think Shakespeare wanted people to understand that it is not right to control other people’s emotions regarding love and infatuation.

    “Now, when thou wakest, with thine own fool’s eyes peep . . . (Pg. 48)  This statement makes it clear that when people wake up from a spell, of infatuation, real love prevails. 

 

Toward the end Oberon seams to love Tatiana more than before because of a quote like this. “Come my queen take hands with me and rock the ground whereon these sleepers be. Now thou and I are new in amity.” (pg 48) what I get from this is that he some what relived to see her and happy she’s no in love with bottom.

 

Assignment # 7 (Super Late!)

   idk how to get this a a photo so i had to use the html.

 

 

Assignment # 6 (Super Late!)  i think that thay might be talking about how all lysander and demetry do if fight and dont even bother to duccus thir problems. so the faries see this and look down with pity on them because thay dont solve thir problems like gentman.

 

 

Assignment #5

Dear Abby am a man with a dilemma I had relations with a woman and now she wont leave me alone I told hear that I was to be married but she ignored it and we carried on. So now my wife to be knows this not that i care but her litter love might try to use it agents me. Is their any way I could shut this guy up before he tell her father?

Sincerely A SMALL A SHELL OF A MAN

DEAR A SHELL MAN

Yes their is you need to talk to the girl that love you and run from this problem am guessing he’s a king since your making a big deal over this. Look if your wife all ready has a lover why the hell are you getting married I seams that neither of you trust one another so why not just let her go??? So man up and go with a person that love you not the one who had money and power that will be your down fall. hope this help.

 

Assignment # 4

Well from whati saw in the movie is alot difrent than in my head i like the move much more because the people in my head arnt randome. what was wird was that thay act alot like us given that is like 1800s i mean thay (Lysan,Hir) were making out behind a building and that was kinda shocking. demetry was alot difrent i figered him more ugly but hes not that bad despide hes a cheater. so far i like the move more than the book just becas i can understaned it better than thinking it becaus i dont underd stand what thay talk about in the book.

Assignment # 3

Wordle: demetry 

 

 

Assignment #2  (zomg super late!)

 

probly the funnest part was when bottem go the roll of the lover and he desprtley try to be any other roll other than that one. he uses his humore like " look look i could be a lion and be RAWR." but what if it frighets the women.

" Then i will roar ever so gental." somting like that hes goofing off but ever so surious. 

 

Assignment # 1

         The relationship Egeus has with his daughter is the same as it is with all parents. She want to marry someone the dad dosen't like and is not as high up on the power ladder. The dad wants her to marry demetrius because of how he's friends with the king and is willing to over look any mistakes he makes just because he wants him to marry the king's daughter. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Independent Novel - Rurouni Kenshin by

 

Nobuhiro Watsuki

 

 

                                                                            

 

 

Indie Reading #37 P. 4 80-90 kenshin is going to tokoy to defet shesio motco and to make shure the hetinmitsurgi can not be use for evil so the secrest of the sword still weill die w/ kenshin

Indie Reading #36 P. 4 67-80 sat


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Indie Reading #35 P. 4 40-67 5/9 sun Wordle: kenshin

Indie Reading #34 P. 4 1-40 5/9 sat Enter Sword hunter Cho hes prity cool but for some reason in the anime he as a sother acent witch i dont under stand since this is japen O_o? but he wanders the would cliting swords and mastering them. hes realy skinny has some redicts hair thay call him broom head hes crazy and thretens to kill the last of the grate sword makers new born son whos is 4 years old but later on kenshin bets him in a fight near a holy the with the last sword  made by the babys grandfauther.

Week 14 33  i think that the title fights the book ok, tord the end he dossent realy wander any more he dose have a home back in tokyo. with karou and sano and all of his frinds. so it kind of dose and dosent at the same time.

Week 14 Entry 32 

week 10 entry 25 


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Week 10=Entry 24   The main character, Kenshin, is so interesting because he's a Japanese swordsman.  I like Japanese culture so I think it's really cool.  The story about him is really good it seems like he's a real person.  He's based of of an actual samurai.   I don't know his name though.  I think his "bipolar" emotions are interesting.  He's all serious when he's fighting and when he's with his friends he's all goofy.  The book talks about his childhood.  His mother and father both die of the same desiese.  He is in a orphanage that travels badits kill the orphans.  Kenshin was spared.  His mentor, Hiko Seijuro, saves his life. 

Week 12=Entry 29 Wordle: Kenshin

Week 12=Entry 28 Saito Hajime was the learder of the third Shinsengumi uit.  He is a swordsman that not longer belongs to the Shinsengumi. Now he is a "police" officer. If any polotician becomes corrunpt, then he just murders them.  They call him the wolf of Mibu because it has to do with were the group was founded.  It was founded in Mibu.  His sword style has to do with the teeth of the worf.  One of his sword moves is called Gatotsu.  It is the  most deadly and most effective moves he knows.  He has a birth defect where he squints his eyes because he is from the Meji area of Japan where this is common.  He has four streaks of hair in front of his face and wants to kill people when he drinks too much.

Week 11=Entry 27

Week 11=Entry 26

week 9 IR 25.) the last chapeter i readt was a side story ware sano met up w/ his old friend from the miltary and his friend now is an artest and is bent on destrong the goverment that wronfuly kill thire capten. sano being closes to the capten he agres to help so sano gets the group of friend drunk and him and his friend set ou. but as thay attack kenshin stops them both. sano punchs his frind in the stomic and brings him back to his house and kenshin hids all the bombs that his friend has made.

week 9 IR  24.)

week 9 IR 23.) so far the only time i wonder is when i think about how i would be in the the book. i would love for kenshin to teach me his sword stile but he wont becaus it is to powere full and can be used for wrong. i think it would be so cool to learn a sword stile and cut bulets in 1/2 and cut so fast that the human eye cant see the cut.

Week 9 IR 22.)

21.) the police decover that 4 bodys have no heads on them so thay go looking for aoshi, with thay find has escaped in a secret passage. as thay find them kenshin lets him hut him forver so that he (aoshi) can clame the title most power full. and Karou welcomes back every one and she has made dinner and wamed baths. megumi tees karou about how shes to hard on kenshin and says that she know how to treat a man like kenshin. so karou get all up set and calles her a vixen, and megumi walks away lafing.

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19.)well after kenshin defeted aoshi kanryu opem drglord shos up with a gatlen gun and shoots at them, to save aoshi all of the members of the obwanta group sacrifice thir live to keep him alive. hna'na is the last to die and kanruy run out of bulets nas kenshin uses his sanbakto to kick his but. thay move on leting aoshi to mourn and thay go up stires to rescue.megumi and she triese to kill he self to repent for her sins but sano doset let he and he grabs the blade. the poice come and arest every on in the house ( but the main people kenshin ect.) and megumi trys to tell the police who she is but kenshin and the other lie all happy like and the police cheafe let them go.

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13.) http://www.onemanga.com/Rurouni_Kenshin/26/01/ i ran out of ideas for a IR so i figer i link a site that hase the seen im on

12.) im on the 2ent book now and kenshin just finshed fighting han'na and now hes fighing aoshi shinomori who is the ninja leader and a equal in fighing as kenshin. 

11.)one of the most significant event in this addishion of rouni ken is when jin-e kidnaps karou and uses her to make kenshin go back to the botosai just to fight him. in the end thow she was able to reach and and convince him not to kill jin-e.

10.) this book allways makes me laught no matter how meany times i read it nobuhiro sense of houmer is grate. its realy the best when this to girls fight over kenshin and the older one saise she would take care of him better the msome sweety sword girl and the younger one get all mad and every one shares a good laugh.

9.) the reason kenshin is so instring is becaus he at one point was the horribal killer and now hes all most like a monk and he trys not to become the killer agen. so i mean this some bi poler in it that every one has he only becomes the killer when hes mad or in a fight.

     8.)if i was a character i would like ot be kenshin becs hes sill and prity much a bad a* but hes also funny and allways helping people.

 

  7.) the title dose the book becaus rurouni in the book means wander and kenshin is sword heart and its about a samuri so i would say it maches

 

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  5.) after the last part kaoru meats kenshin in the town voliting the sword baning act. she tells him about who might be the killer and kenshin all of a sudden need to leave. kaoru then god back to hear hous ware she finda out the her butler like man has betraider he and it was his brother who has bin spreding the rumers of the "botsai" uses her schools stile. kenshin dose soem diging and then go back to kaorus school ware the 2 men are forceing her to sell the dojo but she will not. all of a sudde nkenshin ame a drmatic apperance after knocking a guy uncountus. and it turns or hes realy to Botsai and bacly he beat up the 2 brothers ( but dosent kill then becaus he choues to) and now that kaoru know this he decides to leave but not befor shes ask him to stay and he happly acceps the offer and lives w/ her.

 

 

4.)  In the manga thire are some key difrences in the manga she dose not have systers ( atleast not in the biging any way) and the docter is a compleaty difrent person. and the anime has bin alot more censored then the manga like when he saves her he pulls his groin out of place lol. also he dosent see he in the bath in the manga nor the little hut he gets put in. only reason thay did that is to make the anime longer.  ( thirs another part to the youtube vid but i cant find it :( )

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Comments (19)

ryan sz said

at 8:29 am on Jan 21, 2009

lol woops

Jayson Yeagley said

at 9:03 pm on Jan 22, 2009

Ryan, Please label things much better. Check out a few of your classmates work and see how they are doing thing/ Thanks. Mr. Yeagley.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:52 pm on Jan 22, 2009

Okay! Make sure you now flip the order of your assignment

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:57 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I did it for you.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 11:31 pm on Jan 26, 2009

If you complete assignment 2...fill out the form in the make-up folder. Assignment three would have benefited from having a paragraph that explained what you were writing about. Keep up the writing progress.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:46 pm on Feb 2, 2009

Ryan. I am glad you are reading a book you like. However, you are supposed to do 3 entries per week. You did not label it correctly. Also, do not embed video on this page without permission. Please worry about the main assignment before you worry about the other stuff.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:24 pm on Feb 7, 2009

Week 1---------------IR-----------------2/3 (hard to tell the way it is not labeled correctly)-------------/Please fix

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:26 pm on Feb 7, 2009

Ryan, I have been teaching you to use HOT TRIC RIC. I see no elements of this in your writing. This will really help you. Please try to implement it.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:26 pm on Feb 7, 2009

You can do much better

Jayson Yeagley said

at 9:05 am on Feb 16, 2009

Ryan! This does not cut it. You only have one from week 2 and none from week three. I let you pick your novel. You seem to be really into this type! You should have a lot you can say about this. Please see me!

Week 2-----------------------------IR-------------------------------1/3

Jayson Yeagley said

at 11:33 pm on Feb 16, 2009

Very, very basic understanding of ICE. You really need to work on making it smooth and more subtle.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 11:34 pm on Feb 21, 2009

Ryan, it seems like you changed your thesis. Also, you did not finish assignment 9. I think you could have done a lot better and you could have helped yourself a more. Your IRs need to be more developed. WHen you are doing these. Think of one specific aspect of the reading. Build upon as if you are telling someone in a conversation. Write down what you say. If you need to, record your comments and just type out what you say!
Week 3----------------------IR-----------------------------2/3

Your glogster needs text and form to push the point you are trying to make in MSND

Work on your glogster by re-reading the instruction sheet and reviewing the rubric

Jayson Yeagley said

at 11:08 pm on Mar 2, 2009

Your glogster shows a strong use of technology. Your project would have worked well if you had more text involved. Overall, pretty good job. Keep trying to push yourself in regard to writing and self expression. You can do it!

Jayson Yeagley said

at 10:04 pm on Mar 16, 2009

just graded 18 and 19 and you had nothing! We spoke about a technique for you...and nothing!

Jayson Yeagley said

at 1:33 pm on Mar 29, 2009

Ryan, I have too much to tell you to put it in this box. You need to see me after class on Monday March 30th. This type of effort will not work anymore. I want things to be crystal clear to you and show you how your page doesn't reflect the class and the objectives of the class. You are still not labeling things correctly...still! Care@!

Jayson Yeagley said

at 9:02 am on May 6, 2009

Ryan,
You missed many IRs still. I just graded 30 and 31/32/33. Make sure that things show up on your page if you are going to do web 2.0 stuff. Your fake magazine didn't work. Also, you must label things correctly. You must. Look on the front page of the wiki and folow it. Do it once correctly and then just follow it.

Jayson Yeagley said

at 1:50 pm on May 6, 2009

Indie Reading #1 P. 18-30 1-24-09 Mon

Jayson Yeagley said

at 1:50 pm on May 6, 2009

Indie Reading #1 P. 18-30 1-24-09 Mon

Jayson Yeagley said

at 1:50 pm on May 6, 2009

Indie Reading #34 P. 182-304 2-24-09 Mon

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